Kathleen Valentine's prose is like warm chocolate drizzled slowly over a still warm cake...
it first warms the brain and then pours itself gently over the heart where it can
then saturate into the soul. Suddenly without realizing it you are addicted,
begging for more sensual sweetness.
- posted to Facebook by author Maureen McDermott Gill, January Moon
it first warms the brain and then pours itself gently over the heart where it can
then saturate into the soul. Suddenly without realizing it you are addicted,
begging for more sensual sweetness.
- posted to Facebook by author Maureen McDermott Gill, January Moon
This tender love scene comes late in the story when two of the main characters, both mature, fall in love. The setting is an old convent on the coast in Maine that is being converted to a sculpture studio. From Each Angel Burns
Silver light from a full Snow Moon rising out of the Atlantic just beyond Owl’s Head sweeps across the frigid black waters like a trail of angel’s wings and shimmers through the frozen night. On a Maine night in February when the snow glistens like shattered diamonds, red foxes in their plush winter coats gather under the brittle raspberry bushes tumbling over granite outcrops and watch the sky. Snowy owls soar between towering spikes of Douglas fir and swoop down through the moonlight to snatch a wayward mouse. Clumps of dusty blue juniper berries chatter against each other in the harsh night breeze. Timber wolves, lean and hard, in the deepest part of winter, trail up hillsides through stands of blue spruce in search of big-eyed white-tailed deer stripping away the bark of birch and silver maple trees. The deer scent the wolves and stand silent and watchful then turn and leap off like ballerinas, their plume-like tails raised in alarm.
And if the solar winds have stirred far off in the velvety night then showers of light—gold and violet, rose and green—paint the sky. But on an icy February night in Maine few brave the cold to see them as they dance and flicker over the waves below, over the scattered stones of a crumbling garden wall, over the bent frozen stems of lilies called Persian Priests in an old garden. The quiet thunder of the aurora lends music to the pristine night as moonlight sweeps through a window of antique glass diamond panes set in lead. In that room those priests charged with the care of the souls of virgin nuns pledged to silence and constant prayer took their rest away from the burdensome responsibility of so much virtue.
But this Snow Moon bears witness to a sacrament of a different kind. For on this night the room is graced with two lovers entwined. No longer young, these lovers drift in grateful awe that life has not forgotten them but brought them together at this time when they had thought such possibility long gone—a gift for the young, not for two who have traveled this far down life’s road.
They rarely speak when melted into one another. Words have lost meaning. He covers her and warms her and shelters her from everything that is not his love for her. She takes him in and creates safe harbor from all he braves in the world. Her desire for him takes his breath away. His cherishing of her comforts her heart. She places her hands on his face and lifts it just enough so he can see hers and see how they glitter with the gratitude she feels for him. He kisses her and sinks into her like warm silvery rain on pungent earth. They are long past the age of creating a new life. Instead they have created renewed life, each for the other.
The night deepens and grows ever more silent as they flow together in that most ancient form of worship. Oh God, they breathe, over and over. Oh God.
And God smiles and answers, yes.
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Available in paperback and also for Kindle...
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Available in paperback and also for Kindle...

10 comments:
Sweet Jaysus that's beautiful prose, Kathleen. Oh God. Oh God yes!
Thank you, Maureen -- older is better. ;o)
Stopping by for Sample Sunday. Lovely excerpt.
Thanks, L.C.
That was beautiful.
Thank you, Liz.
What a wonderful words in affirmation of passion. Definitely on my wishlist ASAP.
Touching and so sweet.
Thank you for this lovely sample. I will be back for sure...*S*
Thank you so much. I looked at your blog and, since you are an animal lover, I'm sure you will love Zeke in Each Angel Burns, too. He is Gabe's dog and quite a character in the story.
This is so beautiful. Gorgeous and lush.
Each Angel Burns washes over the reader, first slowly like gentle waves on a quiet day at the shore and then as fiercely as a killer squall. Valentine is a writer who is as talented with narrative as she is with prose. Her dialogue is earthy, clever and utterly believable while her narrative is breathtakingly beautiful, at times sumptuous. Valentine blends literary fiction with its opposite in a remarkable story that satisfies all of the senses. Gabe, Pete and Maggie are indisputably the story's central characters but Valentine presents a compelling cast of actors who support her main cast brilliantly. Julie, Gabe's brittle angry wife, sucks the air out of every scene she enters and Gabe's father Mick is a crusty old guy smarting from the pain inflicted on him by his dead wife, a woman whom he robbed of her dreams by his all-too-human love. Gabe's brother Mike and his wife Daisy are people who have refused to let personal tragedy destroy them and their strength and love for one another plays out like a beautiful but sad symphony. Zeke, Gabe's dog, is an animal without shame; a brazen whore for affection, Zeke is willing to give as good as he gets and returns love with the generosity of a free spirit as only a dog can do.
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